I'm so sorry I never get back to posts and comments when I'm meant to, I'm a very very bad person -.-;
"...in the morning the petty dealers will show up and find vengeance waiting and the police will have to come again..."
That's what got me. Added to the weight of the scene, the permanence of it. Without that it might've just seemed like "Team Owlschach find something nasty > violence happens > roll on next night!", but that really helped it stick.
You also win Can O' Beans for hinting unflinchingly at something so horrific. In fact screw Can O' Beans, you get the whole damn crate.
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"...in the morning the petty dealers will show up and find vengeance waiting and the police will have to come again..."
That's what got me. Added to the weight of the scene, the permanence of it. Without that it might've just seemed like "Team Owlschach find something nasty > violence happens > roll on next night!", but that really helped it stick.
You also win Can O' Beans for hinting unflinchingly at something so horrific. In fact screw Can O' Beans, you get the whole damn crate.
Thanks for sharing <3