This is one of the most enjoyable stories I've read in a very long time. I love how you've woven the scenes together, how it requires actual THOUGHT and interaction from the reader... I think I just love this story.
Ror + Dan + Ghost Stories = FTW in a major, major way. Supreme kudos. For srs.
My new favorite story
Ror + Dan + Ghost Stories = FTW in a major, major way. Supreme kudos. For srs.