#1 - Oh, Rorschach. Loved the look at the superstition that still runs through him (and really, through us all.) Favorite part: [And could that be called a wish, uttered wordlessly into siren-strobing darkness, clambering at a door that won’t open and desperate just to see a living face framed in the entryway’s light before he succumbs?]
#2 - *sporfle* I loved Laurie in this. She's so disrespectful, and totally not falling for Rorschach's scary act, and I just *flail!* I love it! Favorite part: Christ, you've never even eaten anybody, what the hell kind of street cred is that? Great undead terror of the underworld, eating cereal with a cartoon tiger on the box.
#3 - I think I have whiplash. This is such a perfect snapshot of how they were at the end, with Dan's sadness and Rorschach's own shame, and I just, oh geez, I love how you write these two.
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Date: 2009-11-29 05:01 am (UTC)#1 - Oh, Rorschach. Loved the look at the superstition that still runs through him (and really, through us all.) Favorite part: [And could that be called a wish, uttered wordlessly into siren-strobing darkness, clambering at a door that won’t open and desperate just to see a living face framed in the entryway’s light before he succumbs?]
#2 - *sporfle* I loved Laurie in this. She's so disrespectful, and totally not falling for Rorschach's scary act, and I just *flail!* I love it! Favorite part: Christ, you've never even eaten anybody, what the hell kind of street cred is that? Great undead terror of the underworld, eating cereal with a cartoon tiger on the box.
#3 - I think I have whiplash. This is such a perfect snapshot of how they were at the end, with Dan's sadness and Rorschach's own shame, and I just, oh geez, I love how you write these two.