I'm actually just tired so I've been inactive on the writing front lately. Like the past two months now, I guess. D: I'm barely keeping up with the meme, and even then not reading every story like I used to.
But I still very much look forward to each update of this fic, I don't know how anyone could put down such a sprawling, enrapturing, claustrophobic, perfect depiction of a dystopia.
The plot and pacing are excellent, and the emotions are very real, and your metaphors are still gruesome train-wrecks. Screw what you say about this not being subtle and nuanced, by and large it IS.
I'm on messenger often, and your low opinion on your writing worries me. I'm around very often on various forms of IM, you can reach me at FSimonBelmont for aol, lethnomakai@hotmail for msn, and femmesimonbelmont@gmail for gtalk. Talk to me anytime, Etherati.
I didn't jump ship, but...
Like the past two months now, I guess. D:
I'm barely keeping up with the meme, and even then not reading every story like I used to.
But I still very much look forward to each update of this fic,
I don't know how anyone could put down such a sprawling, enrapturing,
claustrophobic, perfect depiction of a dystopia.
The plot and pacing are excellent, and the emotions are very real, and your metaphors are still gruesome train-wrecks. Screw what you say about this not being subtle and nuanced, by and large it IS.
I'm on messenger often, and your low opinion on your writing worries me.
I'm around very often on various forms of IM, you can reach me at FSimonBelmont for aol, lethnomakai@hotmail for msn, and femmesimonbelmont@gmail for gtalk. Talk to me anytime, Etherati.