ext_301049 ([identity profile] tuff-ghost.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] etherati 2010-02-08 08:10 am (UTC)

Acute central cyanosis, her ancient first-aid lessons chime in helpfully as she studies the dark smears. Not enough oxygen in the blood.

I live for this stuff! Not science (ewww), but different people's unique perspectives on weird people's weirdnesses. I loved it in impschach and the more extended treatment here was fantastic.

My favourite part was her noticing Rorschach's scaary amount of stitched wounds and wondering if they would ever heal. Because you so would, if you've just participated in patching up a zombie. I really liked how it was actually a point of discussion rather than just a private worry.

And, that turnaround at the end, where Laurie is considering how in lurrrrve Dan and Ror are, and how Dan is The Rorschach-Whisperer...that was pretty great.

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