I'm really glad more people are writing with 63!Minutemen! I really like the Peter Pan comparison (it goes nicely with the crossgender thing and the childish quality of superheroes). The guts of the world quote is also a nice touch.

I got to back up sandoz_iscariot on the superhero comics thing, though. Going by the timeline Holly's too young for those comics to have come out. Maybe replace with pulp/sci-fi novels?