What a lovely story---reading this was like an emotional bowl of hot soup and perfectly done cocoa on a cold night!
So good to see Hollis and Sally have a part in this story, I loved Hollis' framework story. And it was nicely done, having Rorschach be the one to pull Dan in from the cold and administer the warm-up instead of vice versa, as has been done in most of the other NO/R hypothermia h/c stories I've read. (Not that there's anything wrong with that--I do love me some NO saving Ror from hypothermia h/c! This was a neat change, though.)
I always enjoy your writing very much. You're an extremely skilled writer, and you portray emotional landscapes so very well; it's always a treat to read one of your stories!
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So good to see Hollis and Sally have a part in this story, I loved Hollis' framework story. And it was nicely done, having Rorschach be the one to pull Dan in from the cold and administer the warm-up instead of vice versa, as has been done in most of the other NO/R hypothermia h/c stories I've read. (Not that there's anything wrong with that--I do love me some NO saving Ror from hypothermia h/c! This was a neat change, though.)
I always enjoy your writing very much. You're an extremely skilled writer, and you portray emotional landscapes so very well; it's always a treat to read one of your stories!