Wow. You write Rorschach well. The impulsiveness and desperation seemed perfect. The flashbacks flowed right from the present story, no jarring feelings of shifting time. And Daniel's disorientation seemed right (not that I know much about near-death experience). This is the first fic of yours that I've read. I loved it. Must find more.
beautiful
Wow. You write Rorschach well. The impulsiveness and desperation seemed perfect. The flashbacks flowed right from the present story, no jarring feelings of shifting time. And Daniel's disorientation seemed right (not that I know much about near-death experience). This is the first fic of yours that I've read. I loved it. Must find more.