Really wonderful. I loved the last line and also this one...
Swearing vengeful oaths in his head and under his breath against the hateful degenerates that had reduced his friend to this - and all the while, fretting over the goddamned fluoride and hoping it wouldn’t get too deep into the cuts, do Daniel much more damage than he’d already taken.
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Date: 2009-06-07 07:53 am (UTC)Swearing vengeful oaths in his head and under his breath against the hateful degenerates that had reduced his friend to this - and all the while, fretting over the goddamned fluoride and hoping it wouldn’t get too deep into the cuts, do Daniel much more damage than he’d already taken.