Thank you - I can't really claim the concept (it was a prompt) but I'm actually really happy with the execution of it in that it could have gone heavy-handed in any of a zillion directions and I THINK I managed to keep Ror's reaction relatively subtle. Because, yeah, he's not quite connecting what he's upset about; he has all of the pieces, but is unable, or unwilling, to put them together and really look at the picture they make.
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Date: 2009-06-08 08:13 pm (UTC)