I dono, I think Ror's expression is good. Surprised, but with that hard sort of 'ok that was unexpected but don't expect that to hold off the violence D:<' that I would expect from him. And anyway, that's crap, you're fantastic at drawing people. You have a very, very dynamic style that lends itself to capturing these snapshot moments, and I love it to pieces.
Next chapter: I'm working on it. These next few scenes are very tricky in that if I don't play everything exactly right it may come off as out of character, and of course I could just pick an easier way to progress but I don't really like doing that. So I'm obsessing over every line, every word, the exact flow of it, to try to shape the moment correctly. It's probably about 75% done but I'm constantly going in and re-tweaking that 75% as I work on what's left. It's not abandoned or on pause though, I'm working on it every single day, it's just. Fussy.
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Date: 2009-06-19 03:14 am (UTC)Next chapter: I'm working on it. These next few scenes are very tricky in that if I don't play everything exactly right it may come off as out of character, and of course I could just pick an easier way to progress but I don't really like doing that. So I'm obsessing over every line, every word, the exact flow of it, to try to shape the moment correctly. It's probably about 75% done but I'm constantly going in and re-tweaking that 75% as I work on what's left. It's not abandoned or on pause though, I'm working on it every single day, it's just. Fussy.