This chapter was so full of hopelessness and then at the end I got to take a breath of slight relief. All through this story I’ve felt poor Dan needs a good cry and a hug, especially with the last two chapters. You’ve conveyed his panic and anger and despair so well.
I am very curious to see if Rorschach will comment on Daniel’s methods for trying to break him out of the brainwashing (talking about their past partnership, the touching, and the ‘you’re quitting on me’ line.) now that he seems to be back to normal. And the note in Rorschach’s pocket, that warrants some talking about, but of course he wouldn’t want to live like that.
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Date: 2009-07-12 08:00 pm (UTC)I am very curious to see if Rorschach will comment on Daniel’s methods for trying to break him out of the brainwashing (talking about their past partnership, the touching, and the ‘you’re quitting on me’ line.) now that he seems to be back to normal. And the note in Rorschach’s pocket, that warrants some talking about, but of course he wouldn’t want to live like that.
You always leave me wanting more.
This is a such perfect gem.