AU's for me are always interesting in that the characters are in a situation (vastly) different from their own, and when handled properly can be very amazing stories, and you are handling this wonderfully. The idea in and of itself is fascinating in a "wow thats extremely creepy and would totally suck if it happened" type of way. It's been so much fun so far to read and see the characters reactions to the unfolding events, and they've all been so IC. I especially love how you handle Rorschach, hes always stuck me as one that would be hard "to get" but you handle him very well. Also all of it as a whole has been very well written, everything is weaved together nicely and not a single word seems extra or unneeded. The hopelessness that pervade this chapter, and the note was all so very heartbreaking but in such a beautiful way, and the ending was both a relief and worrying, because your left with this sense of "Hes back ^^....wait is he back for good...or? *worry*" My favorite part I think though was the constant theme of quiting, and the question of who Really quit first?" But yea I love it, ans now that I have rambled on I shall look forward to the next chapter.: )
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Date: 2009-07-12 11:33 pm (UTC)The idea in and of itself is fascinating in a "wow thats extremely creepy and would totally suck if it happened" type of way.
It's been so much fun so far to read and see the characters reactions to the unfolding events, and they've all been so IC. I especially love how you handle Rorschach, hes always stuck me as one that would be hard "to get" but you handle him very well.
Also all of it as a whole has been very well written, everything is weaved together nicely and not a single word seems extra or unneeded.
The hopelessness that pervade this chapter, and the note was all so very heartbreaking but in such a beautiful way, and the ending was both a relief and worrying, because your left with this sense of "Hes back ^^....wait is he back for good...or? *worry*"
My favorite part I think though was the constant theme of quiting, and the question of who Really quit first?"
But yea I love it, ans now that I have rambled on I shall look forward to the next chapter.: )