Must have missed parts 2 and 3 on FFN; but this is awesome! Your Laurie is amazing, precisely the right blend of snarkiness and professionalism -- the detail of tying back her hair before jumping in, exactly what I always think about active long-haired people, athletes or superheroes or whatever. Wonderful action scenes; delightfully sparky dialogue. Thank you!
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Date: 2010-02-08 03:06 pm (UTC)