One of my favorite things of Z!Verse is how many unspoken things there are between Dan and Rorschach that are never put explicitly but that they still get because of how close they've become. Like Rorschach knowing he should apologize, and the mug, and If children's stories really dictated the way the world works..." Children wouldn't die
I'm in love with the imagery you used in the last part, especially the way you revealed that they're all zombies participating and the emphasis you put on the candles. It made for a vivid read. Great job, as always.
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Date: 2010-04-06 08:28 am (UTC)I'm in love with the imagery you used in the last part, especially the way you revealed that they're all zombies participating and the emphasis you put on the candles. It made for a vivid read. Great job, as always.