ahhhh, So happy. I love how you ended this, straight down to Adrian. You really handled him beautifully throughout this whole story, I got to say.
and of Laurie, omg. fffff man. I love her character in this, how cold she turned, and how she didnt want to chance a happy ending could be there for her. but there was and I melted into a little puddle of happiness.
and of course the guys, so romantic, but careful too. You managed to make them so sweet and natural without it ever feeling ooc.
but above all this was a damned good story. I'm so happy to see it come to its rightful and desearved conclusion.
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Date: 2011-11-08 06:15 am (UTC)and of Laurie, omg. fffff man. I love her character in this, how cold she turned, and how she didnt want to chance a happy ending could be there for her. but there was and I melted into a little puddle of happiness.
and of course the guys, so romantic, but careful too. You managed to make them so sweet and natural without it ever feeling ooc.
but above all this was a damned good story. I'm so happy to see it come to its rightful and desearved conclusion.