Eeeee, thank you. Intensity is a large part of what I was going for - impulsiveness, and things sort of spiraling out of control before he realizes what's going on, since that's just about the only way to ever get him into this kind of situation without a long drawn-out fight. D:
And yeah. NO HE WASN'T KISSING HIM. NOT EVEN A LITTLE. NOT LYING AT ALL. SUUUURE.
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Date: 2009-05-02 04:41 pm (UTC)And yeah. NO HE WASN'T KISSING HIM. NOT EVEN A LITTLE. NOT LYING AT ALL. SUUUURE.