Noooot an entirely appropriate song for the fic overall, but it had some imagery that worked and the weird dreamlike thing really connected, heh.
Thank you! I get these stories in my head very visually to begin with so I end up spending a lot of time trying to get the visuals across, I'm glad that's working. :) I will try not to post anon anymore, but I get ashamed of things really easily (that's why this one's not on ff.net, my ff.net account's sort of my 'respectable face' and I don't to be all LOL PORN there.) even when I know there's not anything to be embarrassed about. It took three or four people tag-teaming me on the kinkmeme to get me to post the zombie AU to ff.net heh.
Though to be honest, as I put in the notes, I was more embarrassed of the jarring narrative issues in the original version of this than I was of the sex bits. Since been remedied. :)
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Date: 2009-05-03 12:14 am (UTC)Thank you! I get these stories in my head very visually to begin with so I end up spending a lot of time trying to get the visuals across, I'm glad that's working. :) I will try not to post anon anymore, but I get ashamed of things really easily (that's why this one's not on ff.net, my ff.net account's sort of my 'respectable face' and I don't to be all LOL PORN there.) even when I know there's not anything to be embarrassed about. It took three or four people tag-teaming me on the kinkmeme to get me to post the zombie AU to ff.net heh.
Though to be honest, as I put in the notes, I was more embarrassed of the jarring narrative issues in the original version of this than I was of the sex bits. Since been remedied. :)