Haha thank you. It's such an awesome thing to feel like you're in the middle of a story, and I'm so glad I was able to do that. As for the sensory descriptions; one thing I've noticed is that my writing is pretty full of synaesthesia, but no one ever seems to care. Hopefully that means that it's working somehow. XD
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Date: 2009-05-05 04:18 am (UTC)